Wildcard v2


Just finished reading Wildcard the Top 3 revised version.

It’s another case of slight tweaking. They changed the con at the beginning and a few details through the rest of the story. They also dropped one of the subplots about the female cop’s relationship with her lover. In this version they have the girlfriend in one scene just so we know she’s a lesbian before there’s dialogue about it. I think the script’s better for it – there were too many threads before and the relationship isn’t central to the story.

So they’ve tightened it up slightly but there’s no massive changes and no massive improvement either – but no worse either. So that’s still

8/10

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